Student Gallery - Lesson 4 - Gear Up Project
I'm going to give some of you visual feedback, suggestions, which is easier for me since I'm a visual person. Please view them all, since they provide some guidance on graphic design. But realize they are just suggestions. Consider them. Feel free to ask me why if you wish. If the suggestions work for you, feel free to revise and resubmit. You'll probably get some feedback from Dr. Packenham as well. Graphic design is subjective, and my one visual suggestion is just that - one idea of many thousands of routes you could take with your design.
Tanner, I didn't enjoy junior high at all - so that question, "Why are you going to school?" might just make me want to drop out. I would suggest having some good reasons why I should continue in school...
Carlos, I'm not sure this message would fly. The message might be taken as "Get rich so you can drink alcoholic beverages."
I know that's not the message you're trying to give. I think your message is more "There are other ways to move up the ladder in life. USU Stars! GearUP."
Using a well known public figure to promote your message might end up being trouble for you.
You got a good design visually. I would not cut off the head and bottle, but move it down a bit.